Thursday, March 19, 2020

SOLSC '20 Day Nineteen: Fall into spring

Our massive, old oak
Defies the seasons
New leaves pushing out the old

A carpet of brown
Hides the green of spring
Beneath the sprawling branches

The bluster of March
Rattles small dry leaves
Swirling around my front porch

I gather my broom
And rake, and shovel
To reveal the true season.

10 comments:

  1. Very nice. Thanks. Trees are such good subjects. I like the syllable play too. I may try this!

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    1. The syllable play happened by accident, with the first two verses following a pattern I felt I had to continue. Thanks for the comment!

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  2. Chris, isn't it amazing how nature proceeds even in the midst of trying times?

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    1. I so agree! A reminder that the current crisis is just a part of everything that is happening in the world right now.

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  3. Beautiful, Chris. What comfort there is in seeing the earth renewing itself. The familiar in the midst of the extremely unfamiliar, a hint that things will carry on. Yesterday I heard a lawnmower next door and it flooded me with peace - it really did.

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    1. Thanks, Fran! I find it odd that live oaks drop their leaves in spring; I guess it's the price we pay for its evergreen foliage. And yes, everyday sounds seem even more comforting these days. For me, it was the garbage trucks!

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  4. Your poem is filled with so much hope. We all are ready for a new season!

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    1. Thank you! Nature holds the key for us these days, I think.

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  5. It's hard to believe that today is the first day of spring. It feels like such a gloomy time of year since we're stuck inside with "social distancing." Your poem makes me want to leave the house!

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    1. I am grateful to live in the suburbs, in an older subdivision with large lots and plenty of space. Fresh air does a body good!

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