Sunday, March 24, 2024

SOLSC '24 Day Twenty-four: Four four-by-fours

I almost tripped over
an unmatched black shoe
considered storing the pair
remembered death, always near.

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My husband brought home
daffodils from grocery shopping
they are screaming spring
atop our Christmas tablecloth.

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When I was tired
on this hazy Sunday
I struggled to nap,
ate a brownie, instead.

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Wouldn't it be nice
if the pollinators would
collect all the pollen,
vacuum up the allergens?
 

6 comments:

  1. I love the format of your slice! I think eating a brownie instead of napping, sounds like a great idea!

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  2. Loved the daffodils screaming spring. Glad I am not the only one who has Christmas stuff to still put away.

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  3. This is a great format I had forgotten about. Oh if only those pollinators would vacuum up the allergens how much more I could enjoy spring!

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  4. Love this format - and your way with words - those last lines are all perfection

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  5. These four-by-fours are a delight from start to finish, Chris. The one black shoe is haunting, with the need to save the pair as "death is always near" - and hopefully not from tripping on a shoe. Love the daffodils screaming atop the Christmas tablecloth and the brownie winning over the nap. Thank heaven we had a good rain yesterday, as the pine pollen was an inch deep on the cars and everything else!

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  6. These are fantastic! They work well on their own and collectively. I like the visual contrast of the daffodils atop the Christmas tablecloth (on Palm Sunday), lol! I like the visual regarding the pollinators. It would make a fun comic.

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