--Denise Levertov
I lose myself
floating on the water
disappearing into the
blue vastness above
becoming one with the circling hawk
relaxing into the watery embrace
I am enough, I have enough
I am blessed
by the Creator of wind and water,
hawk and sky.
--Chris Margocs
My theme for this month's blogging challenge is flight, flying, looking up. Levertov's poem not only incorporates those images, but speaks to me of the times of crisis when I learned to let go. Flight really is freefall after a launch, when you think about it.
"One with the circling hawk" speaks to me. I see hawks often and marvel at their graceful flight, but your line "Flight is free fall after a launch," really grabbed my imagination. Deep thinking for early morning. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by, Margaret; I hope these thoughts lead to writing of your own!
DeleteChris, this is beautiful! I'm inspired by your 'in the style of' poem. I'm going to bring your lines with me today, "I am enough. I have enough. I am blessed..." Thanks for a great slice
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paula! "Enough" is my OLW for the year; seemed to fit so well with the rest of my poem.
DeleteI love the poems one then the other... a lovely pairing!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bonnie!
DeleteThe notion of letting go is such an important one. "...when I learned to let go." Thanks for a powerful, inspiring post!
ReplyDeleteLanny, I almost included specific incidents when I did indeed let go in times of crisis, when calm just washed over me and I knew all was as it was meant to be. Maybe another Slice....
DeleteYour poem is beautiful; it imparts such a sense of gratitude, which to me is vital to a life well-lived. Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteI pen in a gratitude journal each night, Fran; I certainly have a lot to be thankful for.
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